My goals:
To add supporting details to ideas to help paint a clearer picture for the audience.
To also use a wider range of describing words and phrases to help develop the audience's understanding of my writing.
The Urinary System
PHOTO: ^ Our Play-Dough impression of the left kidney.
INTRO: The kidney is like a pool-pump because it pumps the urine down to the urinary, via the bladder. On the image above, the yellows are the pipes going to the bladder.
DETAIL: All the blue/black dots are the bits that churn around the urine for quite some time, before they are taken to the bladder. The red parts are where energy and blood is taken to churn with water in the blue parts.
HEALTH: To keep your urinary healthy you should go to the toilet at least every hour and a half. If you do so and have had one and a half cups of water your wee should be a very dim yellow.
CONCLUSION: Without this cycle/system, our body cycles would not function properly. It would be like a cockroach without its exoskeleton. It’s actually quite (and not quite) easy to imagine living without the urinary system.
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