Bat Castle Maze "Reflection"

Body Systems

My goals:

To add supporting details to ideas to help paint a clearer picture for the audience.

To also use a wider range of describing words and phrases to help develop the audience's understanding of my writing.

The Urinary System

PHOTO: ^ Our Play-Dough impression of the left kidney.

INTRO: The kidney is like a pool-pump because it pumps the urine down to the urinary, via the bladder. On the image above, the yellows are the pipes going to the bladder.

DETAIL: All the blue/black dots are the bits that churn around the urine for quite some time, before they are taken to the bladder. The red parts are where energy and blood is taken to churn with water in the blue parts.

HEALTH: To keep your urinary healthy you should go to the toilet at least every hour and a half. If you do so and have had one and a half cups of water your wee should be a very dim yellow.

CONCLUSION: Without this cycle/system, our body cycles would not function properly. It would be like a cockroach without its exoskeleton. It’s actually quite (and not quite) easy to imagine living without the urinary system.

LINK: Click here to learn more about the urinary system.

Similes And Metaphors In Custom "Fireworks"

Similes And Metaphors In Custom "Fireworks"

Do you ever feel like a mindless zombie; (np)

Being pulled back into the sea, wanting to start again?

Do you ever feel, feel so paper thin

Like a house of cards, one blow from caving in?

Do you ever feel like a rasping voice(np)?

Screams but no one seems to hear a thing

Do you know that there's still a chance for you

'Cause there's a sound in you?

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine

Just own the night like you live in it.(s)

'Cause, baby, you're a siren.(m)

Come on, show 'em what you're worth

Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"

As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're a rainbow(m)

Come on, let your colours burst

Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"

You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

You don't have to feel like a poisoned potato.(np)

You're original, cannot be replaced

If you only knew what the future holds

After a hurricane becomes a rainbow

Maybe a reason why all the doors are closed

So you could open one that leads you to the perfect road

Like a new adventure(s), your future(np) will hold you tight,

And when it's time you'll know

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine

Just own the night like you live in it(s)

'Cause, baby, you're a siren.(m)

Come on, show 'em what you're worth

Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"

As you shoot across the sky-y-y

Baby, you're a rainbow(m)

Come on, let your colours burst

Make 'em go, "Aah, aah, aah"

You're gonna leave 'em all in awe, awe, awe

Great White Shark VS Assassin Whale